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Everglade's picture

Collision and Sparkle

(I took the banner photo at Eastern State Penitentiary, my favorite place in Philadelphia.)


In order to write this final evaluation and also find one paper to rewrite, I’m looking back at all my previous papers and smiling at myself. 

I see myself writing the first paper, sitting in front of the computer, struggling for some more words to say; I see the unfamiliarity and nervousness when I first went into Philadelphia; I see myself excited at the new form of homework, making the mosaic until midnight. 

I find some papers that I don't recognize at first, because I was experimenting with my writing style—it became fragmented when we were studying mosaic and NW. I discovered the fun of language, which was very much to my surprise, because I have always preferred science to literature.

I’m amused at the naivety of my early papers—how I stopped a sentence too quickly and robbed it of its true meaning. I’m not saying that my writing is no longer naive, but I’m really delighted to see the progress.

Grace Zhou's picture

re-view of mosaics

 I always regarded the mosaic as fragmented and broken. It is said that“the earliest theory of art… proposed that art was mimesis, imitation of reality.” Thus, whenever I saw the mosaic, I just directly interpret its broken nature as a reflection of our fragmented world, where is collaged by separated people, various emotions and different thoughts. But I forget how magic its connection power is. In other world, I tend to see mosaic as a broken world, but in fact, mosaic itself is a complete art with whole image and expression.

    I think the reason is that I’m distracted by the “form” of art. Mosaic is magic because it challenges the way we used to value the art- “whether we conceive of the work of art on the model of a picture or on the model of a statement, content still comes first.” Mosaic is a kind of special art that attracting people first by its form. Moreover, it is the form of mosaic that still causes the interpretation.

pialamode314's picture

Self Evaluation

If you had asked me what my definition of feminism was a few months ago, I probably would have said something simple like, “it’s the movement to gain equal rights for women.” Of course that is partially true – partially. Now if someone were to ask me about feminism, I wouldn’t be able to talk about it without also bringing up race, class, non-binary genders, etc. I think one of the most important things I have gained from this class is my understanding of the intersectionality and complexity involved in feminism; how it isn’t just about women’s rights – there are so many other factors involved and they all connect. Feminism really does affect everyone in so many different ways.

Ann Lemieux's picture

final web extension: can education fix inequality?

Feminism deals with so many issues, and to me it seems that one of the main issues is inequality. Inequality among people of different sexes, gender identities, sexualities, race, class and levels of ability are all issues that feminism aims to combat. I’m an education minor, and in two of my papers I write about education and its ability to overcome these issues of inequality and give children the same foundation and opportunities, as well as teach them not to discriminate and to continue fighting against inequality. In my last web event, I claim that education is “a relatively easy place to start” breaking gender norms and helping feminism achieve its objective of closing the gender wage gap. However, I feel the need to reevaluate that claim. Education certainly can be a good starting point for feminist activists, and it can have a huge effect on future generations and how the feminist agenda continues decades from now… but educational reform is a very complicated ordeal. Additionally, successful educational reform shouldn’t only target gender norms, but a whole range of inequalities that affect our society and our schools. In the public schools that I went to, and in the middle school that I’ve visited for the past two years as a field component of education classes I’m taking here, gender inequalities are not as apparent as inequalities among the students from different socioeconomic classes.

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Stubborn Writer

                I am a stubborn writer, and I have been stuck in my ways for years.  What may be the most detrimental aspect of my stubbornness is that it is not necessarily bad writing or a bad style, I just cannot change it.  This means that for years I wrote the same paper over and over again with slightly different content, but I never really cared so long as my grades stayed at the same level.  Of course, there are worse things that can happen in writing, but it has left me in a state of stagnation; slowly sinking further and further into my patterns of words, paragraphs, and arguments.

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Borders

                When you live in a suburb of Cincinnati, you orient yourself by the highways.  Get on I-71 and head south into the city.  Or you could take a detour on I-275 and take the long way, avoiding the city itself as you drive into Kentucky.  However, if you head just a little bit east on 275, you’ll hit Terrace Park, while west will get you to Sharon Woods.  Anywhere North and you’re probably heading the wrong way because it’s just cornfields until you hit Columbus an hour and a half later.  Let’s stick to the simple things, though, and head South, straight into Cincinnati.

 

                But where does Cincinnati start? 

                Philadelphia has a border, a river on either side, and a clear, at least from this student’s point of view, delineation between the city and the surrounding areas.  Much like the maps we built in class, even detailed published maps use the Schuylkill and the Delaware as the boundaries of the map:

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[Re-write] Being A Participant in Art -- Discussing with Kaprow And Sontag

       Before my trip to the Old City, I thought it was the spectator that made the picture. But this recent experience helped me realize that it was not that simple. It is not only the audience makes the picture, but also the performer, the creator and the artwork. These elements together make the "participants", who are actively engaged in the art or playful activities and jointly infuse dynamics and diversity into the work. The art is not complete without either the artist or spectators. A work engenders its true meanings with its participants. This also corresponds to Sontag's article on Against Interpretation. We should learn to "see more, to hear more, to feel more".

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Self Evaluation staring Frank and Natalie sculptures

During our first scheduled trip into Philadelphia, I found myself constantly comparing the city to New York. Unable to see it individually, my essay reflecting on the experience drew connections to the street, people, and overall feeling of New York and it’s relation to Philadelphia. Unknowingly at the time, I was using this comparison as a lens for how I viewed Philly. Our second self-scheduled trip aided me in seeing Philadelphia separately from New York as I traveled to a section so different from where I’ve been. Visiting Old City Philadelphia allowed me a new view of the city and gave me a full experience of the historical landmarks and galleries.

Our visit to Isaiah Zagar’s Magic Gardens opened up a new writing skill for me. Mosaicking in writing made me more aware of the overall point that was made in each paragraph. We later practiced this technique after visiting Eastern State Penitentiary. Copying and pasting sentences from fellow classmates reiterated the Zagar’s skill that an entire work of art can be created from small scraps of material. The ESP draft helped me construct an essay that clearly contained several lenses from the point of view of prisoners, reformers, guards, and myself.      

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Critical Play Rewrite

“It’s beautiful. No, it’s not quite aesthetically beautiful, but… It’s beautiful. I mean, the history, the people. It’s not the best part of Philly, but exactly because it’s not perfect, it has potential for improvement.” 

A Temple student told me so on the train to North Philly, during my last trip for this class. Her words reminded me of what Sharon Zukin said, “the soul of a city is often felt to be in the long-time residents”. She suggested that I talk to some local folks, but unfortunately there was little people outside on that snowy day.

I planned to see the mural which has RISE on one side and SHINE on the other. In the  photo online, it’s visible in distance, the pure white letters prominent among the vibrantly colored squares in the background. But standing right in front of the mural, I saw something else hidden under the shiny surface. 

The squares were not just colors, but portraits of artists of this project and residents of this area. By incorporating these portraits, the mural showed respect for the people who gave it life, and connected art with everyday life.

The letters were not purely white, either. Scribbles were all over them. Voice. Inspired. Attitude. Power. Soul. History. Dreaming. Beautiful. We believe life. Love. Hope. 

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And, In the End.....

“Everything that’s difficult you should be able to laugh about.”-Louis CK

“Yeah, my finals had me laughing. Laughing until I had no tears left to laugh with.”-Abby ACK

.           Play and humor are two concepts that go together hand-in-hand. Levels of humor easily find parallels in the levels of play: simple, critical, and deep.

Simple play is the first step in the spectrum of play. In terms of humor, simple play to the least thought provoking forms of humor. The jokes are funny, but this humor is not characterized by biting satire and sublime revelation. It’s not "lesser”, in the sense that it should come secondary to the other forms of humor, but it is the only genre that includes fart jokes. I can’t say I’ve ever heard a fart that made me reevaluate my beliefs and the truths of the universe. I have never, and will never, use flatulent humor as the lens through which I view the world. However, farts are just a small part of humor in simple play.

Simple play humor is the baseline upon which other forms of humor grow. It is the bare essential elements of comedy, rather than the concepts that can sustain a story. Take, for example, the Monty Python sketch The Funniest Joke in the World.

 

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